Today we had to put our poem of the brunner mine on our
bloggs so this is mine in this I have used alliteration and ryme i'm
proud of my poem and if you got this today aka 28.3.19 yesterday
100 years the mine exspoleded.
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Hey Rowan this is a nice wee poem. You have indeed used alliteration and rhyme. I think the word you are looking for is 'hewing'. Good on you for noting the date the mine exploded (28.3). I'm not sure if it was 100 years ago. Great to see you blogging!
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